Blood and Bound

Blood and Bound

8 Part Story 711 Reads 17 Votes
Leseanna21 By Leseanna21 Updated May 09, 2012

Leseanna is a 17 year old girl, she and her twin brother Landon are about to find out that monsters exist not just in our imaginations. They are destined to suffer and then conquer all before their next birthday! Gifted with visions and charisma that pulls others to them they will find themselves thrust into a violent world with no way to turn back.

Leseanna21 Leseanna21 Oct 07, 2011 04:16PM
@Alohomora Thanks bunches, Leseanna is a name that I created especially for the main character in my book. @diehardwriter21 Thank you for pointing out my mistake I will fix it! if you find any more please don't hesitate to let me know!
Great job! Very nice descriptions and details! There's aren't any mistakes that I found except for one. Where you have "turned on her heal and began to walk away", you have the wrong word for "heal". It should be spelled "heel". Just saying. lol 
                              
                              Great job otherwise!.
Alohomora Alohomora Oct 07, 2011 03:17PM
Its awesome. Though I ain't a vampire fan stories on wattpad, i think there is this iky picky feeling that tells me that this story is gonna be good. Good start so far. Love the name leseanna. Its unique and stylish :)
tinakilgore tinakilgore Oct 07, 2011 05:26AM
it's kind of short, you have very admirable details and i love that! well done.
xxxKarinn xxxKarinn Oct 06, 2011 05:26PM
well written but short! ha ha but it's a good kinda short as it makes you feel the need to read on more :-) a great starter
i luv it how you describe everything u don't leave out any details luv this already :D