Secrets, lies and hope (maybe)

Secrets, lies and hope (maybe)

14.1K Reads 291 Votes 20 Part Story
Yolande By yolande1991 Updated Sep 19, 2011

Secrets, lies and hope (maybe)

Amber Wallis is what you would call the girl who has everything and I mean everything.  Ambers only problem is she has a past full of secrets and lies. She hides behind her cheery smile and popularity to hide what she is really going through, depression and self hatred. Is there hope for her yet, or will he spiral just keep spiralling out of control?

dustclears dustclears Sep 27, 2011
Nice start, a few grammar, puncuation problems and maybe some more description here and there would help lengthen it out but other than thay this was really good!!
ZeffaRose ZeffaRose Sep 23, 2011
Interesting. It really pooled me in too! I liked it a lot. I love nooks that they call there mother Mum. I think it's awesome!
yolande1991 yolande1991 Sep 21, 2011
@xoshannonxo27 @Gemini3301 thanks guys, personally i feel the first few chapters are a bit boring but hey! thats justs me lol. it gets much more exciting the further you go :D
CookiMonster CookiMonster Jun 02, 2011
Oh my god! I feel like i'm reading about myself! It's so weird! This is exactly how my life is except i'm not emo and I don't dress that way.
yolande1991 yolande1991 Jan 05, 2011
@Just_Me_Always thanks i think it starts a little slow but its getting quite exciting :) :)
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Dec 14, 2010
This is really nice even if I'm not fond of mystery/suspense :)