The perverse new teacher...<3

The perverse new teacher...<3

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Mellody By Readingfreak505 Updated Feb 08, 2011

Allie... New teacher.... Yah...:)

  • hawaii
  • yay
JohnMurrayMcKay JohnMurrayMcKay Jul 08, 2012
It's good writing- you just a hook for your story. Something to make it stand out from the crowd. But I am nitpicking really- this goes into my library!
JakeVanderArk JakeVanderArk Apr 29, 2012
Hey! It's an intriguing idea and interesting to read! You had several grammar and punctuation errors which makes it a little difficult to read, but other than that, nice job!