Is it worth it?  (Naruto fanfic)

Is it worth it? (Naruto fanfic)

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kgrie1888 By kgrie1888 Updated Nov 07, 2016

Naruto lives at the orphanage, is everyone's favorite nii-chan, and is the only person the other kids will listen to. Naruto however, is beaten and starved there. This causes the blonde to fall into a deep depression, and in a flash of hope, the Hokage allows Naruto to join the academy early after his 4th birthday.

With an especially traumatizing birthday, Naruto stops talking altogether. With the help of "'Rama-sensei," Naruto goes to great lengths in the ninja ranks.

Naruto makes friends with the most unlikely people, none of which are even close to his age- not that anyone else realises that...

Can these friends drag Naruto into the light and bring back his voice?

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love you all xoxo K.


OXOX

skyler_dragneel skyler_dragneel Feb 09, 2016
I'm not gonna critisize you or anything I'm just gonna give you some constructive advice that's, maybe add commas and periods it's kinda a run on sentence adding commas and periods make the paragraph stand out more ya know. Sorry just some advice that all😊
*hugs Naruto tightly*
                              No Naru! You're not a monster! You're the most adorable ninja ever!
                              *hugs Naruo again*
AshKit13 AshKit13 Jun 17, 2016
U just did a Run-on sentence...without commas... U r confusing me.
MissMurderz MissMurderz Feb 07, 2016
No Naruto. Look, they want a monster, SO LETS GIVE 'EM A MONSTER!! CHA!
Grace_Van_Atta Grace_Van_Atta Jul 29, 2016
I agree with the run on sentence idea. This on is just a pet peeve of mine but sometime if the author doesn't capitalize character names or things like i, I will start to not like the book as much.
Amy_Ng10551 Amy_Ng10551 Jul 13, 2016
=[= I don't give a shìts ass about being it a ninja village but seriously..how would a kid get on A FUDGING ROOF