Percy Jackson God power  Book 1

Percy Jackson God power Book 1

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AlphaeusOmoniyi By AlphaeusOmoniyi Completed

After the final Battle Percy Jackson has saved the Olympians and the world. To show their gratefulness Zeus gave Percy a wish to become a god. As we all know know Percy declined. What happens though when Percy is forced to accept immortality?

  • action
  • betrayal
  • immortal
  • percyjackson
  • suspense
Dear AlphaeusOmoniyi,
                              You really need to make a lot of edits to your chapters and make sure they make sense to your readers. You will get a lot more votes and reads if your story makes sense
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demons_rain demons_rain Feb 13
Oh my gosh I had no idea what was happening in the first chapter
vanicall32 vanicall32 Apr 04, 2016
Once you get past the first chapter, things start to make sense.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
vanicall32 vanicall32 Apr 04, 2016
I have no idea where this is going, but it sounds like a really good book.😅😲😵😛😓