The First One...

The First One...

18.2K Reads 705 Votes 48 Part Story
SONIYA By UrsSoniya Completed

# 9 in Grownups as on 20-10-18


(Under editing) 

'The First One' is a story about Samantha, a 25 year old grown up working for an export firm. She is mature, hard working, focused and cheerful. 
Her life is exactly as she wants it to be except for one thing which she wants to avoid the most till she thinks she is settled and that one thing is....

This story is about a girl who has trust issues when it comes to relations..but one day her carefree life gets changed when she meets her First One..Ben.

Will she be able to avoid love?
Will she be able to control her feelings?
will she be able to listen to her heart?
will she be able to trust?
will Ben succeed to be 'THE FIRST ONE..' in her life?

  • betrayal
  • boss
  • chicklit
  • colleagues
  • complicated
  • emotions
  • feelings
  • friendship
  • generalfiction
  • grownups
  • kiss
  • love
  • lover
  • romance
  • romantic
  • trust
  • wattys2017
UrsSoniya UrsSoniya Dec 23, 2015
Thanks dear..hope you read my other work too...
                              Heres the link
UrsSoniya UrsSoniya Dec 14, 2015
Thanks for suggestions..i.will definitely recheck..i know it needs editing...and will do surely as possible.
blare_lina blare_lina Dec 14, 2015
Try to write I using capital letters and avoid using short forms in dialogues like 'u'  for 'you'. Rest is all good. I can't say much in grammar as mine is not that good to tell someone. keep writing :) *
kayleytuckerwrites kayleytuckerwrites Nov 12, 2015
I love this so far too! Can see it going somewhere really good!
aloeho aloeho Nov 11, 2015
I love this so far! There is a few spelling & grammar errors but it honestly doesn't matter to me when I'm reading a good story! I love your style of writing& I'm defiantly going to read on!