Poetic Attempts

Poetic Attempts

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idesiretosing By idesiretosing Completed 

My collection of poetry.

  • christ
  • experience
  • god
  • lies
  • truth
idesiretosing idesiretosing Oct 25, 2011 
@Whiskeynscotch thx for the constructive criticism all ways open to help :D
Whiskeynscotch Whiskeynscotch Oct 22, 2011 
This is a awesome poem with good imagery.. There are some words that are misspelled and could be worded different, bit other then that I enjoyed reading it ;D
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nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Apr 24, 2011 
This was depicted and visually a lovely and heartrendingly heartbreaking piece with endearing and passionate emotions it was wonderfully profound and thoughtfully bittersweet. Simply remarkable.
emobands emobands Apr 06, 2011 
Wow. This is incredible. You have no idea how much I am loving this poem. You have real talent.
ZzMyKissofLifezZ ZzMyKissofLifezZ Apr 05, 2011 
I like this one a lot ((While I sleep...)) It is really cute ^-^
ChristianRose ChristianRose Apr 05, 2011 
I love the way you write, and I just read this first poem.... The vocabulary you used meshes together well.
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