The False Vampire

The False Vampire

36.2K Reads 74 Votes 2 Part Story
Ebony By ebonyhailey Completed


Adrienne Hurriet-Haider always believed she had a simple life, and suddenly she's thrust into a world that most remain oblivious too.

Busy dodging the sun, brownies and memory enchantments, Adrienne realises her life will forever be different.

  • disease
  • faeries
  • fairies
  • false
  • folk
  • love
  • magical
  • mate
  • mermaids
  • pack
  • prank
  • rare
  • safehouse
  • soul
  • vampire
  • werewolf
  • witch
xxLilMinx xxLilMinx Jun 14, 2013
this is an unique concept in that this girl isn't being taken from a normal life to throw in a vampire's world in that this girl would have been better off if she was in it.
SallySandwich SallySandwich Sep 05, 2012
I kinda looked at this and thought OMGGGGGG ANOTHER VAMPIRE STORY!? I will admit I didn't quite go back and read the prologue! Hahaha!
kviveiros kviveiros Jun 07, 2012
So far, I like this. Vampire stories usually aren't my thing, but this seems interesting. I like your word choice, and your descriptions. I like how you ended the chapter leaving me wanting more :) So far, so good!
BordeauxChic BordeauxChic Jun 06, 2012
This story seems very interesting! I like your description a lot! You use strong vocabulary and your words flow! It's really good!
Demoiselle_dragonfly Demoiselle_dragonfly Jun 05, 2012
Its what the kids have in 'The others'...thats about all i know lol!! Or knew, before i read this ^_^ This should probably be moved to the beginning i think!
Demoiselle_dragonfly Demoiselle_dragonfly Jun 05, 2012
This is a really interesting story! Really unique and Adreinne is such a unique and cool character! There are a few tiny mistakes and the chapters are pretty short but still good :)