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Caught in the Blaze

Caught in the Blaze

497 Reads 10 Votes 6 Part Story
Caitlynn By Caitlynn Updated Oct 02, 2010

Amber realizes she doesn't deserve the life Tyler has given her. She knows this as much as she knows the sound of a burning man's screams. But she can still enjoy the sweet perfection for a little while, right? The swaying docks and summer sun, the people, the life, and Logan, most of all Logan. She knows it wont last. But she can still enjoy it while it does. Because sooner or later everything burns, and Amber is sick of worrying about the ashes.

HoorayForPeePee HoorayForPeePee Feb 13, 2011
That was... amazing! It was detailed beyond perfection, as well as suspenseful, mysterious, and entirely interesting from the first sentence. I loved your word choice and the complex similes you used wonderfully! I'm completely addicted, which is something that happens once in a blue moon:)