City break: Chapter 1

City break: Chapter 1

3.7K Reads 239 Votes 9 Part Story
Francis By francisxyzk Completed

A chance encounter with a beautiful stranger in a New York diner leads Brendan on the biggest roller coaster ride of his life.

kmom77 kmom77 Aug 31, 2015
writer's prerogative and wonderfully done. Can almost smell and feel the sights. Toronto, Canada is where I grew up and we are considered the sister city of New York
kmom77 kmom77 Aug 31, 2015
he asked her to play hooky for the day that was his naïveté coming out
Alexxbhampton Alexxbhampton Jan 05, 2015
oh hell nah I i'm scared of the dark so I woulda ben freaking out
BooksAreFabulous BooksAreFabulous Dec 04, 2014
I don't like this story. It's a bit predictable and cliche. I'm disappointed in this so far. I'll just stick with your book The Surgeon. 
francisxyzk francisxyzk Mar 04, 2013
@GraceGurlO Thanks for the comment and the advice - much appreciated!
GraceGurlO GraceGurlO Mar 04, 2013
I love this!!!! Gotta luv my city :) just be careful with what ther girl says because a new yorker wouldn't say "mad"