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Percy Jackson The Heir Of Slytherin- AU

Percy Jackson The Heir Of Slytherin- AU

46.1K Reads 1.5K Votes 12 Part Story
Thomas By _theravenking_ Updated Nov 12, 2016

Lel I wrote this when I was 12 ON HOLD p.s read with caution it's kinda crap

CaseyGalvez CaseyGalvez Nov 09, 2016
Lol I've always loved Percy Jackson, and I love this chapter 💓
thornjinx23905 thornjinx23905 Sep 06, 2016
The idea is fantastic! However the grammar is really bothering me; there should be a new paragraph every time a new person is speaking and comas in the quotations at the end. That is not all that needs fixing but it would make the reading a whole lot easier
Perseus_Jackson811 Perseus_Jackson811 Sep 14, 2016
This is in third person point of view not Percy's... Percy's point of view would be i , my, we
_JJJ_the_ultimate_ _JJJ_the_ultimate_ Feb 10, 2016
A small part of you Percy. You really are Voldemort's grandson aren't you. Though that would be a well protected horcrux.
chocolarefrogs chocolarefrogs Dec 13, 2016
Um no offense but you switch both verb tenses and who's speaking (3rd person to 1rst to back to third) in this paragraph  you might want to clean that up to make it easier to read and better sounding
GoToTartarus GoToTartarus Feb 20, 2016
Imagining an 18 year old godlike boy who has been through two wars and all sorts of hell (literally and figuratively) call his father, an all powerful god of the ocean, "daddy" feels so wrong to me.