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Valentina Shulen By Valentina14 Updated Aug 15, 2011

About a few teens who have powers and strange abilities but are completely on their own. One strange thing happens after another, starting with a very unique crystal the previous owner was all too happy to get rid of...

  • abigail
  • adam
  • aniala
  • blue
  • chain
  • dream
  • fantasy
  • gem
  • gifts
  • glow
  • inn
  • last
  • moon
  • night
  • orphan
  • powers
  • scientists
  • shop
  • silver
  • supernatural
  • teen
  • teleport
  • unnatural
  • unusual
finnie finnie Feb 19, 2011
Nice story. But i don't feel like i'm in it. To really engage lots of readers, try to put some more emotional descriptive language in it. But its a great concept. You should definantley not give up!!!! Great work :D xx finnie