The day Percy Jackson Dies

The day Percy Jackson Dies

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MichaelPeleshaty By MichaelPeleshaty Completed

The seven finally battle Gaea but at a terrible cost, Percy Jackson's life.

Someone freakin dump him in a lake or OCEAN FOR CRYING OYT LOUD
I'd say to Percy if I was annabeth,"A-at least-"begins to weep"a-at least w-wait" pauses to cry more"f-for a r-red ball f-for C-Cerberus? Y-you know-" cries even more "h-how much h-he l-loved it." Then I wouldn't be able to say anything more, I'd be crying to much.
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                              I'm so sorry, I just had to. When you gotta reference, you gotta reference.
Well, your a pathetic excuse for a great-grandmother!! I say great-grandmother, since Hera's my grandmother and she's not all that much better, considering she is, well, Hera, and threw my dad off Olympus just cause she thought he was ugly.
This is slightly confusing because you keep changing from 1st person to 3rd
that's not how they killed Gaea, but i think u knew that. i don't mean to be mean, but it isn't very well written. make it better by adding more periods and commas!