The Dawn Has Come

The Dawn Has Come

23.1K Reads 534 Votes 24 Part Story
jinglebells_18 By jinglebells_18 Completed

"come here" i said. she stood there and i repeated" darling, come here, will you or shall i?"
as i said her small body moved towards and i grabbed her hand and she whimpered.
"s-sorry!"
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this is a story of a vicious and ruthless mafia, name, Aizen Sousuke, who is also a vampire.

orihime inoue s simple, cute girl whose luck was never her side and stumbles on upon a mafia, who get intense possessiveness on her.

check out the story, vote and comment and i dont own bleach..
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jinglebells_18 jinglebells_18 Oct 03, 2015
haaa....its not like that, that u will get nightmares....its not that creepy
elephant44 elephant44 Oct 03, 2015
I'm not a lover of vamp stories,  they give me the creeps, but I will carry on reading. It's ure fault if I have nightmares. Lol
elephant44 elephant44 Oct 03, 2015
It's a good start, not boring,  ure a good writer. and u have a talent,  just a few spelling mistakes, but it makes it more in,  cause it gets ure brain ticking  , until.u no Wat u have written. Lol