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Nicole By fantasyteenwriter Updated Oct 01, 2010

Carter has lived with a secret that he has told no one about for years. Figuring he could trust his best friend, Josh, Carter told Josh. Soon after his group of friends, it seems to Carter, start to turn on him and no one is listening to him or believes him. Even the girl he had a crush on since the day he saw her and was lucky enough to become friends with, Aurora, seems to be turning her back on him. Carter is now swept into a deep feeling of loneliness and depression.

berryhall berryhall Nov 07, 2010
I like the tone. Its informal but still formal. Its really good. :) 
fantasyteenwriter fantasyteenwriter Sep 25, 2010
Lol. Thanks. This is actually one of my incomplete stories. I still have to come up with what happens next. Any ideas?
fantagurl fantagurl Sep 25, 2010
I think it was very good. You got straight to the point. I can't wait to see what the surprise is lol!!!!!!!
KAFrak KAFrak Sep 21, 2010
he also wasn't the most unpopular person. ---hmmm, interesting ending. The writing is good so far
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