Father

Father

280K Reads 5.6K Votes 24 Part Story
Kelsey Turcotte By kc1tubbol Completed

Father has forty children, but they aren't his children. They are his prisoners. They must call him father. VIvien Love has been prisoner here for two years now and wants out of the hell they live in just like evryone else, but when Father 'falls in love' with her more serious consequences emerge. She now believes she will be able to escape and rescue everyone, but what of Father has turly fallen in love with her? Will she lie to save her life? Or will they all die trying?

AJRod6 AJRod6 Aug 29
So there is 40 of you? 30 girls and 10 guys? Why can't you take on a old man? 😑😑😑😑😑
Lmfao @ all the "cocking" comments! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
sarahbishh sarahbishh Apr 11
The boys all WHORE the same thing. 😂😂😂😂 Please don't fix it.
i'm bummed out because i had a nightmare VERY similar to this and I wanted to write it haha :) but now I can read this one
Nice book except the names aren't really....unique. They're common names you find in any fanfic
AJRod6 AJRod6 Aug 29
So there is 40 of you? 30 girls and 10 guys? Why can't you take on a old man? 😑😑😑😑😑