Didn't Expect

Didn't Expect

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valentina By valentina_yea Updated Jul 14

I don't remember much after I blacked out, my head was throbbing. I tried to move my hands to the back of my head to feel any blood from the hard hit but my hands were tied to each bar handle of the chair. It was dark, pitch black. "Somebody help," I shouted. Then I heard movement from the corner of the room.
"Shh, Don't scream," someone whispered. I shot my head in the direction the voice came from. I can hear footsteps coming towards me. I still can't make out who is behind the darkness. Then I felt hands being placed over mine. My heart started beating faster than ever. The grip on my arms tightened. I let out a little squeal. Inches away from my face, I felt hot breathe on my skin. I lost it.


Alison is just your average senior with achieving scores. Her life turns upside down when a serial killer is sexualy obsessed with her. Will Alison figure a way to stop the killer or will she fall into the game?

Highest Ranking: #14 mystery/thriller 09/05/16

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Life_is_madness Life_is_madness Aug 21, 2016
I like this so far! 😊 Mind taking a look at my story I just published? (:
Wings-of-Insanity Wings-of-Insanity Jul 09, 2016
Dude give the dirty look back, I would, then flip them the bird✌🏼️
Cliche_Heart Cliche_Heart Aug 18, 2016
I love it. It's really great. I would suggest trying to use less I's and try adding a bit more description and feeling into it but it's quite amazing :$
IceyCakes02 IceyCakes02 Jul 25, 2016
Everyone is stating there times for school and I'm like "y'all know your times?! I can barely make it in on time" lol
believeinjenna believeinjenna Mar 19, 2016
Bruce 😂😂😂 my neighbors name is bruce. Bryce* i fixed your mistake❤️
alexanderbasheer_ alexanderbasheer_ Dec 29, 2015
I can tell that in the future of this book, we are going to find out the things we didn't expect........ ;)