Exposed (#wattys2016)

Exposed (#wattys2016)

28.3K Reads 1.8K Votes 36 Part Story
alien By dulling Completed

Completed. BoyxBoy. 
Moving from Orlando to Philadelphia changes nineteen year old Hale's life - literally. His alcoholic aunt is never home, leaving him and his eldest cousin, Levi, to look after the four younger children. Back home in Florida, his grandparents raised him after his dad got shot playing golf and his mother was declared bipolar, getting locked in a mental institution. Now, he is left in a new city with new people.

Playing the parent for three years now, Hale unintentionally gets involved with the boy who everyone avoids, creating a bigger mess than ever anticipated.

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yeddabix yeddabix Dec 17, 2016
Love it already!  Why hasn't it gotten more votes!? +︿+
SweetAngelx SweetAngelx Jun 16, 2016
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                              Revise the line you said *I got done* *have done* is more suitable.  I don't think I like the way he obtained his 'extra cash'. But then,  who am I to judge? Anything is possible.  I like the bluntness in Hale and how he acted as everything was OK.
Adorkable-laughter Adorkable-laughter Apr 12, 2016
This didn't suck at all! It was interesting to glimpse their situation! I'm excited to keep reading
lindayassine- lindayassine- Apr 07, 2016
I like how you left this honest note at the beginning and warned us what this will be about and I'm actually really interested to know what realities people face everyday.
Mousky Mousky Dec 29, 2016
The storyline kinda reminds me of the tv show shameless. I'm definitely going to read this all in one sitting 😊
jeanaswanson jeanaswanson Jun 13, 2016
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                              Consider removing the second--this time. Having it written twice so close to one another seems a bit redundant.