Memories of the Forgotten (ManXMan)

Memories of the Forgotten (ManXMan)

25.6K Reads 1.6K Votes 20 Part Story
Mee Chan By chameee92 Updated Jul 18

Mason Richards opened his eyes after being in a coma for a long time. The face of the love of his life was the first sight he saw. He thought everything will be okay, but little did he know that the man in front of him was no longer the same man he once knew. 


Pierce McKnight feels like there's a hole in his life. Waking up to a surrounding and people he didn't recognize was scary. He didn't know what to do. But overtime, with the people who called themselves his 'parents', he moved on and settled his life. What will he do when he comes face to face with familiar startling ink-black eyes? What will he do when he realizes that the hole he felt can only be mend by this person? But the glimmer of the golden wedding band around his finger made him realize his life just got a whole lot more complicated.

I like it so far. Just...you mix tenses in a sentence, that's my nit pick. Also, rather than telling us, you could show us instead. Other than that, it's well-written.
KaySetonks KaySetonks Dec 27, 2015
Well here I am, and you have me hooked, such a terrible accident to happen to mason and his beloved, now to see where it leads.........!
daxtooon daxtooon Oct 22, 2015
I think I almost ripped my hair, it made me cry -almost-  I love the cliffhanger wherein there's kinda thrill for me
- - Oct 04, 2015
This...Is...Awesome, sad but awesome! I think you did a very good job and now I am hooked!
EmberRex EmberRex Aug 28, 2015
I had a feeling you just wrote this to make me cry :''''( either way I love it..but still :(
Littleton7 Littleton7 Aug 22, 2015
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so excited! Its so well written. Great job!!