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Innocent affection

Innocent affection

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babyboybaby By babyboybaby Updated Feb 18, 2016

I stared at him silently, his blonde hair  a beautiful contrast to his tanned skin. His black shirt stretched taunt across his back, as it hugged his biceps. His aroma of cinnamon and musk had my stomach clenching as I pressed my thighs together. He hunched as if he felt my gaze on him and turned to look at me with his dark eyes. I felt myself shifting with discomfort as he lazily eyed me up and down, a slight smirk grazing his crafted lips. 
Aurora Daniels is a curvy 22 year old that hates the word exercise.  She loathes people who call her lazy and unfit. She's happy with her body and doesn't plan on changing her diet or body because of what other people think of her . When Damian Black enters her life, she unwillingly feels a deep connection to him and his fitness fanatics. Put a curvy girl and a personal trainer together and what do you have.... Innocent affection.
This is my first book, please give it a try.

"Are you Sirius? 
                              I'm sorry i couldn't not reference Harry Potter, it was right there
crazy_alina21 crazy_alina21 Dec 21, 2016
Isn't that picture at the beginning from Tacoma Washington because I've been their before
KaylasWrites KaylasWrites Dec 06, 2016
It seems good but you said gazed three times in less than 2 paragraphs other words could be looking,glancing,eyeing,watching,peering. Just so you know, some constructive criticism 🙃