a forbidden love vampire x reader

a forbidden love vampire x reader

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asuna yuki By asunayuki_17 Updated 3 days ago

[y/n] was an average teenage girl. she had a happy life a loving family everything she needed but her life went to hell when she met "him."

brosempai brosempai Mar 29, 2016
Just some constructive criticism: you have a lot of listing going on "she got up, she got dressed, she ate breakfast" etc, and you seem to jump around in POV, at first it was 3rd person "she did that" to 1st person "i did that" which can be very confusing. There is potential though! Keep at it!
Aren-Amika-Chan Aren-Amika-Chan May 07, 2016
This one is gonna be a pervert one 😄😄😢😢😡😡😬😬😠😠😑😑☺