a forbidden love vampire x reader

a forbidden love vampire x reader

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asuna yuki By asunayuki_17 Updated 2 days ago

[y/n] was an average teenage girl. she had a happy life a loving family everything she needed but her life went to hell when she met "him."

brosempai brosempai Mar 29
Just some constructive criticism: you have a lot of listing going on "she got up, she got dressed, she ate breakfast" etc, and you seem to jump around in POV, at first it was 3rd person "she did that" to 1st person "i did that" which can be very confusing. There is potential though! Keep at it!
This one is gonna be a pervert one 😄😄😢😢😡😡😬😬😠😠😑😑☺