My Internet Master

My Internet Master

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StoryMakerClaire By StoryMakerClaire Updated Feb 19, 2015

Elise was a stubborn teen. She wasn't your average sixteen year old that partied till dawn or even the kind to nuzzle into a book. Elise would rather spend her days cooked up eating cream doughnuts and watching videos she had a passion for, bondage. But, with her weight issue being a constant reminder, will she face the idea of romancing Keith? A sadistic lover she met online..

fairy_lights8 fairy_lights8 Feb 28, 2015
I suggest rewriting the dominant character. No real dominant in the BDSM world would ever address a potential submissive like that right off the bat.
KrisChrisKris KrisChrisKris Aug 22, 2014
I'm always worrying about getting computer viruses and malware and such. Random thought.
XBridexOfxIceX XBridexOfxIceX Apr 15, 2013
You are too kind! X3 and i love how she just abandoned the laptop haha! that's so me :3
Electricbarbarella28 Electricbarbarella28 Apr 15, 2013
hey girl I will read it as soon as I get a chance I've been really busy but thank you for letting me know you posted something. and I promise to give you my feedback as soon as I get a chance.
StoryMakerClaire StoryMakerClaire Apr 14, 2013
Aww thank you everyone I will take on board of what you have said :) xx
PikaBoo99 PikaBoo99 Apr 14, 2013
I really like it! I'm not that quite sure on where it should go though but ou should keep writing and see where it takes you!