My Internet Master

My Internet Master

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StoryMakerClaire By StoryMakerClaire Updated Feb 19, 2015

Elise was a stubborn teen. She wasn't your average sixteen year old that partied till dawn or even the kind to nuzzle into a book. Elise would rather spend her days cooked up eating cream doughnuts and watching videos she had a passion for, bondage. But, with her weight issue being a constant reminder, will she face the idea of romancing Keith? A sadistic lover she met online..

fairy_lights8 fairy_lights8 Feb 28, 2015
I suggest rewriting the dominant character. No real dominant in the BDSM world would ever address a potential submissive like that right off the bat.
KrisChrisKris KrisChrisKris Aug 22, 2014
I'm always worrying about getting computer viruses and malware and such. Random thought.