That's the Way I Loved You

1 Part Story 392 Reads 18 Votes
Aimee Shaye By AimeeShaye Completed
chasidy goes away for the summer to Tennessee and meets a boy named Hunter who seems completely perfect.  No one knows what Hunter actually is until Chasidy brings it to their attention.  Will she stay or will she go?
I like the plot. It's not just another one of those stories that the new girl in town shows up and falls in love and they live happily ever after. This story is different because it has a plot. I really like your writing. But I think you should describe the things around Chasidy more. Like with her friends, you should at least say their names and describe their appearance a little..to give the reader a little more to imagine, instead of just calling them 'My girls'. But I do like the way you described Hunter...very interesting. Nice story...about love and loss. Haven't read one like this is ages. So be sure to post next so I can see what is going to happen next. *Voted*
I like the plot. It's not just another one of those stories that the new girl in town shows up and falls in love and they live happily ever after. This story is different because it has a plot. I really like your writing. But I think you should describe the things around Chasidy more. Like with her friends, you should at least say their names and describe their appearance a little..to give the reader a little more to imagine, instead of just calling them 'My girls'. But I do like the way you described Hunter...very interesting. Nice story...about love and loss. Haven't read one like this is ages. So be sure to post next so I can see what is going to happen next. *Voted*
I like the plot. It's not just another one of those stories that the new girl in town shows up and falls in love and they live happily ever after. This story is different because it has a plot. I really like your writing. But I think you should describe the things around Chasidy more. Like with her friends, you should at least say their names and describe their appearance a little..to give the reader a little more to imagine, instead of just calling them 'My girls'. But I do like the way you described Hunter...very interesting. Nice story...about love and loss. Haven't read one like this is ages. So be sure to post next so I can see what is going to happen next. *Voted*
I like the plot. It's not just another one of those stories that the new girl in town shows up and falls in love and they live happily ever after. This story is different because it has a plot. I really like your writing. But I think you should describe the things around Chasidy more. Like with her friends, you should at least say their names and describe their appearance a little..to give the reader a little more to imagine, instead of just calling them 'My girls'. But I do like the way you described Hunter...very interesting. Nice story...about love and loss. Haven't read one like this is ages. So be sure to post next so I can see what is going to happen next. *Voted*
I like the plot. It's not just another one of those stories that the new girl in town shows up and falls in love and they live happily ever after. This story is different because it has a plot. I really like your writing. But I think you should describe the things around Chasidy more. Like with her friends, you should at least say their names and describe their appearance a little..to give the reader a little more to imagine, instead of just calling them 'My girls'. But I do like the way you described Hunter...very interesting. Nice story...about love and loss. Haven't read one like this is ages. So be sure to post next so I can see what is going to happen next. *Voted*
I like the plot. It's not just another one of those stories that the new girl in town shows up and falls in love and they live happily ever after. This story is different because it has a plot. I really like your writing. But I think you should describe the things around Chasidy more. Like with her friends, you should at least say their names and describe their appearance a little..to give the reader a little more to imagine, instead of just calling them 'My girls'. But I do like the way you described Hunter...very interesting. Nice story...about love and loss. Haven't read one like this is ages. So be sure to post next so I can see what is going to happen next. *Voted*