Secret Intelligence

Secret Intelligence

1.7K Reads 56 Votes 5 Part Story
Nadia By InspirationSparks Updated Oct 16, 2012

I had always known of the existence of werewolves in our world. But I had never been involved like I am now. Only they don't know I know. Hmmm....Possibilities. Josie was always in the know. Without anyone knowing, until now. Starting a new school was hard enough, but being the only human? That’s worse...

  • andi
  • badass
  • callum
  • dean
  • intelligence
  • joe
  • jones
  • josie
  • motel
  • nightmare
  • ricky
  • school
  • secret
  • steph
  • werewolve
  • werewolves
- - Oct 17, 2012
For a werewolf prologue, I liked the take. The clues were very thought out and it wasn't very cliche. Good work!
Anorafox Anorafox Oct 17, 2012
I like how her personality really flows into the introduction. Sounds like it'll be good.
EKShortstories EKShortstories Oct 16, 2012
Wow, excellent beginning! I like how you introduced her and her life right off the first page, normally I think it's good to space things out throughout the story, but I usually like knowing the character sooner than later :) Voted!
- - Oct 03, 2011
i really like this beginning :) it's got me hooked :D voted!
dialupthesun dialupthesun Aug 09, 2011
Great start! And is very different to most werewolf stories. Voted =]
AlexandraKarlsson AlexandraKarlsson Aug 06, 2011
You should change 'Ofcourse' into two words, dear. ;-) 
                              Interesting beginning and I feel cool for being the first one to comment.