The First Element: Water

The First Element: Water

252K Reads 3K Votes 26 Part Story
Queenie By Avancidy Updated Nov 26, 2011

I am Umiko. 
A Child of the Sea.
I can control water.
The ocean speaks to me.


I hear the voice of the Great Taniwa.
I am special.
I am dangerous. 

I am The Chosen.

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WhenWeBuryOurFriends WhenWeBuryOurFriends Apr 22, 2013
BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TheFantasticalEmpire TheFantasticalEmpire Nov 19, 2012
Not boring at all, makes anyone want to read more :) I love the elements- but I've chosen myself as water before. This story sounds so cool, so I better get reading :)
_bluevalentine _bluevalentine Aug 20, 2012
Heck, it was just short but it gave me goosebumps! Literally!
Avancidy Avancidy Apr 22, 2011
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Avancidy Avancidy Mar 06, 2011
@MintyPen lol nah it's just you :P
                              
                              I was just kidding. No, actually yeah it does sound like The Last Airbender because I used it as an inspiration but I assure you that as the plot progresses, you'll find that it's different.
fdhdnjdswjksbdes fdhdnjdswjksbdes Mar 06, 2011
Is it me or does this remind me of Avatar the Last Airbender