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The Alpha's Abused Mate

The Alpha's Abused Mate

55.4K Reads 1.9K Votes 13 Part Story
Jahnavi By cutewizard1234 Updated Mar 07

Angelina Daniels was abused ever since she can remember by her father. The day she transforms into a wolf, her father tries to kill her and she runs away. 

Ashton James is the alpha of the red moon pack. He has always dreamed of having a mate and loving her unconditionally. So what happens when he finds her?Will he break her walls and make her happy again or will her past haunt her? 

Read to find out.....

megmcc2003 megmcc2003 May 03
Aww. That's just sad. Your dad didn't let you talk to anyone or go outside or anything like that. If I were you I would be mute and ducking run out of there while you dad is away.
ComicCritz ComicCritz Jun 02
You have written a great book and this is only the first chapter.
TejaJf TejaJf Apr 25, 2016
Put a little more detail on how she knows this like did her mom tell her or what
thequeenof_FIYA thequeenof_FIYA Oct 10, 2016
Maybe put some full stops or commas in there or something cause that's all one sentence and a bit of a mouthful...
                              Genuinely trying to help, don't think I'm being mean or anything
Just like Hermione's one potion of Ron. Its what he smelled like.
TejaJf TejaJf Apr 25, 2016
I would suggest putting it like this 
                              I know I have werewolf healing abilities but with all the abuse I don't think that there going to work for a while.
                              I really like this and am not trying to be rude with the correcting just trying to help. I do this to every book I've read