Second Hand Wedding

Second Hand Wedding

83.8K Reads 3.1K Votes 14 Part Story
Mary Fahey By MaryFahey Completed

Teacher Chloe's engagement has ended two months before her wedding. To recycle her stylish event, she proposes to the hunk she jilted twice for eccentric behaviour!  
  
Vintage car expert Silas accepts. He plans to hide his shameful diagnosis until after his second hand wedding. With his business success, this time he will show Chloe he's more than her match.

patito_ail patito_ail Jan 30, 2016
I've never felt so attached to characters in a first chapter! It's really really good
dalainasdreams dalainasdreams May 20, 2016
Very cute pitch I love vintage things myself so this grabbed my attention
dalainasdreams dalainasdreams May 20, 2016
I can relate to her! I know about cars my father collects them long story lol my mother was a school teacher for years this kind of reminds me of my patents in ways ;)
concreteroads concreteroads Feb 19, 2016
aw, I really like the concept and I really feel for Silas.
                              
                              some of the time jumps (?) are a bit confusing though. like they're at the garage, then on the beach, and he has time to get a ring? and then the flashback to the past. maybe put some kind of divider in to help break up scenes?
apisgirl apisgirl Dec 20, 2016
What could it be? Dyslexia? Attention deficit? I'm going to try to figure it out before it's revealed by the story.
LilaRose94 LilaRose94 Jan 08
I love the start of this and the concept behind it. I really like both the characters and look forward to reading more.