Mr. Scyndarella: Tale Of Deception

Mr. Scyndarella: Tale Of Deception

381 Reads 69 Votes 8 Part Story
Kris with a 'K' By Living_Tribunal Updated Jul 30

Jace Parker had everything a teen could want- a loving family and riches to match. It all changes when his parents die in a tragic car accident and he is forced to live with his sister he never met and he is forced to be her family's personal servant. But life is not what it seems; secrets begin to unravel and he begins to uncover the truth about his new family. 
Can he expose the snakes in the grass and find out what really happened that tragic night? Who can he trust....?
Cover made by: @sabrinachick44

  • betrayal
  • cinderella
  • city
  • family
  • mystery
  • redemption
  • revenge
  • school
  • teen
ProxyInc ProxyInc Aug 26
His cousin's age seems a bit random. Unless it's vital to the plot you could probably cut it without it being missed.
ProxyInc ProxyInc Aug 26
I love seeing this. Its always great to hear of supportive parents💕
MissyofDark MissyofDark Jul 17
This is a really strong first chapter. I like your writing structure alot!
I look forward to getting stuck into this some time tomorrow. Got my mum here over the weekend so going to bring my read forward ^^ 
                              
                              Hope I still think this is a really good read! haha ( of course I will, poor Jace! )
Thank you for the comment. I'm not great at writing action so hence the start in that way.  I appreciate the feedback and I'll work on it. Thanks again xD
mittkitty8 mittkitty8 Jul 18
I really like this! I love the detail you put into it and I like how you ended the chapter!