The matchmaking scrolls(KotLC team Foster-Keefe fanfic)

The matchmaking scrolls(KotLC team Foster-Keefe fanfic)

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Black_Swan_Jolie By Black_Swan_Jolie Completed

This is just the normal days for the Keeper Crew until they get their matchmaking scrolls. Sophie is extremely excited and the boys are happy -no- they are ecstatic. This is set after Sophie, Dex and Biana are out of the Elite Levels

Freckle680212 Freckle680212 Dec 05, 2016
I agree with starsunmooneclipse. It's a bit confusing to know who's talking without the paragraph breaks.
Keefegrl Keefegrl Jan 30, 2016
I've been looking everywhere for this! This was the first thing I ever read on Wattpad! *wipes away tear*
Starsunmooneclipse Starsunmooneclipse Oct 15, 2016
Okay it's good so far from the first chapter but I wanted to point out that you start a new paragraph every time a different person speaks and you need some punctuation at the end of every sentence vendors with they talk.  Other than, it's pretty good!
ferntailwarriors ferntailwarriors Jan 09, 2016
Aww. I feel kinda sorry for Marella  (don't judge), she really wanted to become an empath to help her mom.
Its_RowRow_ Its_RowRow_ Nov 20, 2015
Could you possibly get word out about my new short story please? I just started out and really want to get noticed
roeckash roeckash Aug 10, 2015
haha. lol. haha. thats funny, as you can tell. i knew marella would be a guster