••No one had ever made Mr.Styles feel anything but lust. Until Madeline walked into his office ••
Not to be rude but you definitely need to work on your writing love ,, he doesn’t have to readdress her every sentence unless a third person joins the conversation. Just some friendly advice
Shouldnt she be calling him "Mr. Styles"? I mean, he is her boss
Maddie Fitzpatrick? Like from The Suite Life of Zach and Cody??
he's so like infatuated with her that he's like the guy who's like "oh please call me Harry" kinda thing