The billionaire's love  (#watty's 2015)

The billionaire's love (#watty's 2015)

67.1K Reads 1.6K Votes 14 Part Story
Dinky.p05 By DinkyPunjabi Completed

#351 in romance - 19/10/16.

Jackson Parker the multi - billionaire not only arrogant, rude but also hot & the sexiest bachelor alive & also the CEO of Parker corp . when meets Eliana Kingston falls for her but Eliana has a aim of her life before letting Jackson know that she too have feelings for him also Ethan Gosling who is the head of mafia is behind her  .. also she wants revenge & justice from the person who nearly killed her sister !! will she succeed ?? will she be able to get hold of the person who nearly killed her sister?? what will happen when Jackson will know about her aim ?? will they end up together or not ?? 


Its a suspense , revenge , mystery & above of all a  billionaire's love story !!

iPokeYou iPokeYou Oct 24
How come Ethan let her leave easily!? (Dumbfounded)....
                              
                              I smell somerhing fishy here.... and I hope it was just Ethan... LMAO
rowlandsmith rowlandsmith Dec 21, 2015
eliana's best friend kacey is going to makeit worse for  eliana by hatching up some stupid plan and they both might get caught doing it before they try going ahead with their plans.
Mystical_Star Mystical_Star Nov 08, 2015
So far so good, yes there are some grammer mistakes but it's not gonna kill anyone;)
                              Well done
DinkyPunjabi DinkyPunjabi Nov 05, 2015
Thanks for your review .. and yeah I will take care of that in future :)
sweetimagica sweetimagica Nov 05, 2015
Nice start. But I think that a story should never start with ringing of an alarm clock. It is the most common opening line and most of the people don't really like to read it.
stephy_digitsucka stephy_digitsucka Nov 05, 2015
Great thought behind it, a few grammar mistakes but even the greatest do such, overall very good start and i'm enjoying it thus far