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Convicted Love

Convicted Love

5.5M Reads 74.3K Votes 38 Part Story
mamie1990 By mamie1990 Completed

Paige loves her life as it seems fullfilled. She get's a job at as a prison guard in her Uncle's Prison. She meets some interesting characters and a guy who seems closed off to anyone. Will he open up to her?

14thEagle 14thEagle Mar 10
You need to stay in tense. Be consistent with verb tenses, else it can confuse the reader. 
                              
                              You can trust me. I'm a certified Grammar Nazi. I have a master's in nitpicking. Even have a card.
14thEagle 14thEagle Mar 10
-'s is possessive. It can be substituted with an "of" phrase. (Ex: My brother's ex <--> the ex of my brother)
                              -s or -es is plural.
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That's an AFRICAN AMERICAN belt for your information. F*cking racists.
are so many people who***** 
                              
                              YOUR GRAMMAR MISTAKES ARE COMING TO MY GRAMMAR DEATH CAMP!
xXLoveXx0076 xXLoveXx0076 Nov 17, 2016
All of these people are saying she just spoiled the book... the book is titled "CONVICTED LOVE" and the main character is a PRISON COP!!! WHO DO YOU THINK SHE'S GOING TO FALL IN LOVE WITH, A POTATO!!!