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Convicted Love

Convicted Love

5.5M Reads 75.4K Votes 38 Part Story
mamie1990 By mamie1990 Completed

Paige loves her life as it seems fullfilled. She get's a job at as a prison guard in her Uncle's Prison. She meets some interesting characters and a guy who seems closed off to anyone. Will he open up to her?

14thEagle 14thEagle Mar 10
You need to stay in tense. Be consistent with verb tenses, else it can confuse the reader. 
                              
                              You can trust me. I'm a certified Grammar Nazi. I have a master's in nitpicking. Even have a card.
14thEagle 14thEagle Mar 10
-'s is possessive. It can be substituted with an "of" phrase. (Ex: My brother's ex <--> the ex of my brother)
                              -s or -es is plural.
Yeah me too.  You never hear fathers calling their ADULT sons "my baby boy"
shakalawn shakalawn 6 days ago
Didn't she gave us a speech about using "love" very rarely? Idk I didn't read it all it was too deep for a beginning 😬
Granger08 Granger08 Jul 11
Finally! a normal character. I hate stories with 15-16 year old chicks going all hormonal.
DarlaAM DarlaAM 6 days ago
I haven't measured myself... for a reason. I'm probably 5'1 at 15