True Beauty

True Beauty

10 Part Story 57.7K Reads 1.1K Votes
Something_beautiful By Something_beautiful Updated Dec 09, 2011

High school. For some, it includes some of the best days of their lives.
Others, however, find that they are lucky to survive. Nikki Sullivan is one of the people who would be happy simply to survive. Every day is a struggle for her as she is viciously bullied. Day after day, she is told that she is worthless, fat, ugly... She is called a monster, and worse.. Unfortunately for her, it becomes so constant that she begins to believe in the lies. But then, there is Trenton Freeman. Trenton is an average guy; average friends, average grades. He is a decent guy, and gets along well with most people. But then, he runs into Nikki. Will he be able to stop Nikki from believing the lies that she is constantly confronted with? Will he be able to bring hope to Nikki when she feels that there is none? Will he be able to  make her realize just how beautiful she truly is, even when he is outnumbered? Who will Nikki believe- Trenton, one guy, or what seems to her like the rest of the high school? Will Trenton be able to help her before she loses all hope and it's too late, or will Nikki give up on everything? Can Trenton save Nikki?

SlyArrow SlyArrow Mar 25, 2013 10:22AM
Pretty great, I can relate to it and I understand the message :)
                              Update it more, your work is pretty great :)
TwigletLover TwigletLover Mar 26, 2012 08:04PM
@Something_beautiful
                              You do not need to improve one bit! This is AMAZING and contains a beautiful message :D♥
@Tiye13 -- what do you mean? We love hearing the opinions of fans so we can improve the story. What part did you not like?
TigerBee TigerBee Jan 29, 2012 04:37AM
There's this one word that's kinda been glued :P Everdate. Haaha, try spacing it out.
                              I like this POV, it's unique. Keep it up.
retroFunk retroFunk Jan 26, 2012 09:57PM
This is a really good start. Captivating, to say the least. I haven't seen a single grammatical error yet, and the plot is kind of over done, but still, you make it work. :) Good job.
JDBConnected JDBConnected Jan 25, 2012 04:51PM
Wow. :) I love the plot. The story kept me captivated. Well done!