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Pen Your Pride
Dreamer (Currently Being Revised)

Dreamer (Currently Being Revised)

62.6K Reads 2.6K Votes 34 Part Story
Joelene (Jo) Slater By WarriorWriter56 Completed

Ranked #89 in Markimoo category!

"How could he hurt such a beautiful flower?" he whispered, and it was obvious that he hadn't realized he'd said it out loud before smiling almost sadly. "I'm sorry I wasn't there to help."

You leaned in towards his hand barley to show that you appreciated the contact before offering a smile of your own. 

"It's okay, Mark; you're here now. You cheered me up when no one else could. Thank you."

He came closer to your face, leaning forward to where he was an inch, if not less, away from your face. He inclined his head and pressed his forehead against yours before you both closed your eyes and just sat there, enjoying each other's reassuring company.

"You're welcome."

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fluffybuns77 fluffybuns77 Dec 21, 2017
Perfect example of how to start off a story well :) compelling, enough backstory without word vomit, and a lot of feeling pressed into the words. Lots of meaning without the clutter. Well done! You’re a wonderful author!!
WritingRabble WritingRabble Aug 13, 2017
I never had this...
                              I didn't want anyone to help me with this all, I just toughened it out...
                              But I kind of regret it now...
Nah, fam, I love thunderstorms. Contrary to popular belief they actually help me sleep
Bunnygirl413 Bunnygirl413 Jan 19, 2017
I can never see a Mustang as a car anymore 😂. All I see it as is a Colonel
-antihero- -antihero- May 14, 2016
                              THATS HOW GOOD THIS IS
                              I SIMPLY ADORE YOU SAMANTHA <3 
                              SWEETIE HON!
PorcelainSoldier PorcelainSoldier Jan 31, 2016
Beautifully written. Just a quick note, be careful about repeating words. I have read many stories that killed the atmosphere by over using the word 'like' 'and' 'or'  and so forth. I love the story, I'm not trying to be a troll either. As I had said before; beautifully written. :)