high school crush

high school crush

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David flores soriano By David_f_soriano1 Updated Oct 09

It was around 7:30 jack stud there looking down at his bed that had a bunch of his clothing scattered everywhere. Soon jacks silence was interrupted by the sound of knocking on his door and a voice on the other side saying "can i come in" jack responded with a single "yea." When the door opened there was a brown haired individual, who was wearing blue jeans that had holes and a tight black shirt and a leather jacket that looked like he's had it for a long time. Jack was standing there in nothing but his boxers staring at his cousin and said "can you help me out i don't know what i should wear." "Wow t cant believe that your asking me for fashion advice" the guy said chuckling raising one eyebrow at jack. "This isn't funny Flynn i really don't know what to wear" Jake said worried, "alright I'll help you let me see what you got" Flynn said looking at all the clothes scattered around the bed and picked out a black tank top and a blue jacket that had a snowflake on the zipper and black ski...

I've only read two sentences and I already hate this because of the grammar.