She's Mine Revised

She's Mine Revised

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lala1333 By lala1333 Completed

From the very begining Paige Webber knew that Derek Trager was the one for her. The Night of graduation Paige and best friend Ally get into car accident. That night Paige found out she was pregnant. After her daughter was born it seemed like everyone was trying to hurt the little girl or take her away from Paige. Derek returns home from boot camp and finds out what is going on.

nobleadd nobleadd Apr 29
Sorry but who is Carly? I just started reading this is this a sequel?
So overall this has a really intriguing plot and could go really far, but you need to use more adjectives to describe what they are doing, what they are seeing/smelling/tasting/feeling etc, and how they say stuff. It would really add to your book
Um dude use ur common sense if u see 2 guys that are protective of her are standing right next to her u really wanna call her a slut... he's an idiot.
MrsChelsiner MrsChelsiner Aug 17, 2015
Oh my god! For some reason I read that as her brother and got really confused for a second