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7 Deadly Sins - The Lost Banished Heir

7 Deadly Sins - The Lost Banished Heir

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LyriX By Tri3LyriX Updated Jul 17, 2012

The Seven Deadly Sins have awoken and are now in search of "The Lost Banished Heir", Cain who would be the key to their ascension to power. Cain's reincarnation a 19 year old boy who on his 20th birthday would become the most wanted human among these 7 Demons.  Will the sins claim his immortal soul or will he over come the darkness and temptation of each sin and rise with new found virtues.

Michael_Josephs Michael_Josephs Sep 17, 2012
Very very good prologue, and intriguing concept that I look forward to reading. The writing style is clear and easy to read as well.
Tri3LyriX Tri3LyriX Sep 05, 2012
@Penguins_Forever12   = ) glad to hear it
                              @LianneMckeown  Yes the vid really made it all come together thanks for noticing and reading
xxitsmeishaxx xxitsmeishaxx Aug 30, 2012
This is very alluring and interesting! Makes you want to read more, great job :D
Tri3LyriX Tri3LyriX Aug 24, 2012
@Stand_in_the_rain  I get you thanks I'll edit it Asap = D thanks for reading
                              @GabrielleDompreh  ^_^ it is believe me keep reading  and thanks for the feed bac
imagineandcreate imagineandcreate Aug 24, 2012
the prologue lures the reader in sounds like an interesting read well done :)
Stand_in_the_rain Stand_in_the_rain Aug 23, 2012
In your second paragraph when you say 'glancing around bored', it should either be 'glancing nd, bored, ' or use an adverb instead.