The Italian Promise

The Italian Promise

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Moon Burglar By MoonBurglar Updated Feb 28

"Put me down !" I furiously screamed at Mario who hand swung me over his shoulder like a sack of potatoes "Who me ?" He chuckled " Mario this isn't funny put me down" I was so focused on him that I hadn't noticed that we'd actually gone into the pool house until he sat me down onto the couch. "Wait here" he told me with a with an evil grin "I'm just going to get into more...how you say...comfortable attire but please make yourself at home" before I could protest he was gone. All I could think of was finally getting  out of this hell hole as I got up and looked for my escape 

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Navas father promised that if he couldn't pay back his loans he'd give his daughter to him. What happeneds when her father can't pay back his loans and the man wants his guarantee ? What happens to her ? Especially when that man is the top Italian mafia boss with connections around the world

thirteeniee thirteeniee May 27
Whers the paragraphs at, but good job though i liked it you just need to lay it out better
LeslyClass LeslyClass Jan 21
It was great! and don't worry "Gave my pleasure" I always make mistakes like that XD
LeslyClass LeslyClass Jan 21
I think that was great details and a great chapter. Just don't forget to make paragraphs ok?
lisalander lisalander Jan 13
Even though there is little talking in this chapter i like it
Melz20015 Melz20015 Jan 13
Please write in paragraphs writing like this kind of puts me off no offence