Creepypasta Yaoi lemons

Creepypasta Yaoi lemons

32.4K Reads 447 Votes 7 Part Story
♡Blackmist creepy love♡ By BlackMist123 Updated Sep 18, 2015

First Yaoi lemon book so take it easy with me I would try my best to do it...is already out soo 
YAAAAY!!!! >-<

  • creepypasta
  • fanfiction
  • lemons
  • requestedopen
  • yaoi
May_R_Spears May_R_Spears Oct 23, 2017
Roses are red 
                              Cactus are prickly 
                              My God did that escalate quickly
MotorcycleBae MotorcycleBae Oct 17, 2017
Not to be rude or anything, but your chapters lack punctuation. Like, for example, periods. I hope you take this feedback and apply it to your work. I really enjoy it, but I have a hard time following the plot. :/
VALICx VALICx Apr 15, 2017
I think what happened is that you were focused on the smut part that you didn't really pay attention to the other areas but I enjoyed this story. I think you might want to work on your grammar and spelling to improve this story 😁
horsy90967 horsy90967 Oct 06, 2017
Use punctuation. And capital letters. I mean come on this is how you get more views on your book
Akuma1018 Akuma1018 Apr 24, 2017
My very first thought was he gave the A masion what the heck is a masion and then I was like ohhhh mission.
MrRingRing101 MrRingRing101 Jul 11, 2017
That*
                              Slender*
                              Hoodie*
                              Masky*
                              blushed*
                              looked*
                              shocked*
                              at*
                              kissed*
                              on*
                              his*
                              pinned*
                              rubbed*
                              moaned*
                              flipped*
                              came*