Creepypasta Yaoi lemons

Creepypasta Yaoi lemons

28.2K Reads 417 Votes 7 Part Story
♡Blackmist creepy love♡ By BlackMist123 Updated Sep 18, 2015

First Yaoi lemon book so take it easy with me I would try my best to do it...is already out soo 
YAAAAY!!!! >-<

  • creepypasta
  • fanfiction
  • lemons
  • requestedopen
  • yaoi
May_R_Spears May_R_Spears a day ago
Roses are red 
                              Cactus are prickly 
                              My God did that escalate quickly
MotorcycleBae MotorcycleBae 7 days ago
Not to be rude or anything, but your chapters lack punctuation. Like, for example, periods. I hope you take this feedback and apply it to your work. I really enjoy it, but I have a hard time following the plot. :/
VALICx VALICx Apr 15
I think what happened is that you were focused on the smut part that you didn't really pay attention to the other areas but I enjoyed this story. I think you might want to work on your grammar and spelling to improve this story 😁
horsy90967 horsy90967 Oct 06
Use punctuation. And capital letters. I mean come on this is how you get more views on your book
Akuma1018 Akuma1018 Apr 24
My very first thought was he gave the A masion what the heck is a masion and then I was like ohhhh mission.
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