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Eclipse Edward's POV (on hold)

Eclipse Edward's POV (on hold)

31.3K Reads 255 Votes 6 Part Story
Daisy Nielson By Daisy-N Updated Aug 21, 2011

We all know that Eclipse is from Bella's POV (Point Of View), but what about Edward Cullen, her husband (in Breaking Dawn)? Why can't he have his side of the Twilight saga Eclipse told to the world? Well, this is his POV of Eclipse.
AUTHOR NOTE: I am not Team Edward or Team Jacob, I am Team Paul, okay? XD Just want to point that out XD

There are two many typos and it's to close to the original. Using the same words and phrasing as eclipse from Bella's point of you is kind of annoying and I highly doubt that Edward and Bella would use the same terms and phrases, it doesn't work. Sorry.
MoniqueKearse MoniqueKearse Nov 20, 2016
Is each other supposed to be close to each other or spaced out
MoniqueKearse MoniqueKearse Nov 20, 2016
Alice and why not just used the word smile once instead of twice in my option
AymaHaider AymaHaider Oct 08, 2016
Dont get offended for what i say but trust me its a rotten effort to write all that , that has already been written by stephenie ... You have just replaced bella's name with edward's , its really more frusterating than dissappointing and then there a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes in it
LillySampson LillySampson Feb 14, 2015
You had a couple spelling mistakes other than that I loved it
R_Doster R_Doster Apr 11, 2013
I have to agree with @Kkrryy, I understand the effort but all you really have done here is just flip the story. Its just as flat as Bella's POV. Edward is a man of many words and many emotions. I am having a hard time staying focused because it is almost word for word.