Sweetie

Sweetie

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Emily By BtsGraceffa Completed

Joey and Daniels Relastionship is unbreakable but will someone try and get Between them? 
Don't ask about ch. 8...

KathleenPerino KathleenPerino Nov 29, 2016
Might I offer a bit of constructive criticism? The dialogue is a little TOO Joey Graceffa. You're using all his signature lines in one sentence. I would recommend spreading it out a bit.
TaylorHarty6 TaylorHarty6 4 days ago
Same😂😂 that's honestly what I do too when I tell my crush they are cute hah