Sweetie

Sweetie

22.3K Reads 752 Votes 50 Part Story
Emily By Janiels_Fangirl Completed

Joey and Daniels Relastionship is unbreakable but will someone try and get Between them? 
Don't ask about ch. 8...

KathleenPerino KathleenPerino 4 days ago
Might I offer a bit of constructive criticism? The dialogue is a little TOO Joey Graceffa. You're using all his signature lines in one sentence. I would recommend spreading it out a bit.