poems :)

poems :)

1.1K Reads 9 Votes 11 Part Story
Christaaaa By LionsPride Updated Jan 15, 2013

My thoughts written down on paper which i thought I'd share

    Mr_Cape Mr_Cape Jan 26, 2011
    as i was saying earlier..it's brilliant..thank you for dedicating it to me.. (: Voted!
    LionsPride LionsPride Jan 17, 2011
    @Lizzie_Ox thank you for telling me I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
    LiZ-RoSe LiZ-RoSe Jan 17, 2011
    Woah. I just love this. You brought your point accross really well, and it flowed....beautiful.
                                  Oh, and try not to get your 'you're' and 'you'rs' mixed up ;D
                                  <3
    LionsPride LionsPride Dec 11, 2010
    @JoannaNestoridi thanks :) 
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  @SWEETxMINX  ha thank you glad you liked it 
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  @EyExplod :) thank you your a better writter  though 
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  @mariaannareese thanks for the feedback :D
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  @XxDeathxX ha thank youuu :)
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  
                                  @Ryuzaki_L :D
    AliceGraivenille AliceGraivenille Dec 05, 2010
    Good one. Holds emotion. 
                                  Try to make it though a bit more clear...
                                  what I mean is that you've mixed a bunch of styles...that's not a bad thing, just a little not common for a poem. BUT IT'S GREAT!!!
                                  
                                  ;)