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poems :)

poems :)

1.1K Reads 9 Votes 11 Part Story
Christaaaa By LionsPride Updated Jan 15, 2013

My thoughts written down on paper which i thought I'd share

Mr_Cape Mr_Cape Jan 26, 2011
as i was saying's brilliant..thank you for dedicating it to me.. (: Voted!
LionsPride LionsPride Jan 17, 2011
@Lizzie_Ox thank you for telling me I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
LiZ-RoSe LiZ-RoSe Jan 17, 2011
Woah. I just love this. You brought your point accross really well, and it flowed....beautiful.
                              Oh, and try not to get your 'you're' and 'you'rs' mixed up ;D
LionsPride LionsPride Dec 11, 2010
@JoannaNestoridi thanks :) 
                              @SWEETxMINX  ha thank you glad you liked it 
                              @EyExplod :) thank you your a better writter  though 
                              @mariaannareese thanks for the feedback :D
                              @XxDeathxX ha thank youuu :)
                              @Ryuzaki_L :D
AliceGraivenille AliceGraivenille Dec 05, 2010
Good one. Holds emotion. 
                              Try to make it though a bit more clear...
                              what I mean is that you've mixed a bunch of styles...that's not a bad thing, just a little not common for a poem. BUT IT'S GREAT!!!