My thoughts written down on paper which i thought I'd share
as i was saying earlier..it's brilliant..thank you for dedicating it to me.. (: Voted!
@Lizzie_Ox thank you for telling me I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Woah. I just love this. You brought your point accross really well, and it flowed....beautiful.
Oh, and try not to get your 'you're' and 'you'rs' mixed up ;D
@JoannaNestoridi thanks :)
@SWEETxMINX ha thank you glad you liked it
@EyExplod :) thank you your a better writter though
@mariaannareese thanks for the feedback :D
@XxDeathxX ha thank youuu :)
Good one. Holds emotion.
Try to make it though a bit more clear...
what I mean is that you've mixed a bunch of styles...that's not a bad thing, just a little not common for a poem. BUT IT'S GREAT!!!