protective parents

protective parents

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let your spirit run free By horrocks Updated Nov 22

anakin and padma always saw ahsoka as a daughter and obi won saw her as a neice so what happens when she is kidnapped and tortured?

Good plot, thought you need to make sure to add punctuation.
WinterWolf561 WinterWolf561 Nov 24, 2015
You really need to look at your sentences.  There were non. It was a single sentence less text.  I like the plot though