protective parents

protective parents

29K Reads 1K Votes 30 Part Story
let your spirit run free By horrocks Updated Jul 06

anakin and padma always saw ahsoka as a daughter and obi won saw her as a neice so what happens when she is kidnapped and tortured?

stop being rude guys!! This is a really good book, dont tell her to add punctuation and longer chaoters, not cool:/
YouPunyHumans YouPunyHumans Nov 18, 2016
Good plot, thought you need to make sure to add punctuation.
WinterWolf561 WinterWolf561 Nov 24, 2015
You really need to look at your sentences.  There were non. It was a single sentence less text.  I like the plot though