In which a girl with too many thoughts and a boy with too much spare time meet at an ice cream shop and find each other sweeter than the ice cream.
This seems like a really lovely read, and I absolutely love the cover
I saw your profile picture as Sam Winchester, so I had to read it XD
🎶And now, looking in your eyes, I feel in my heart the start of something new🎶 xD
I love your writing, it's so smooth and lovely :D and omg, she met him!!! or sees him...
The but suggests a change in topic and I feel like your previous paragraph doesn't call for this but. Like it would flow without the but (okay, that sounds weird).
I'm not sure remark is the right word. The word "extent" seems to fit better, in my opinion. :-)