Lickety Split / ✓

Lickety Split / ✓

13.7K Reads 1.1K Votes 15 Part Story
she // her By Awkwardly_ Completed

In which a girl with too many thoughts and a boy with too much spare time meet at an ice cream shop and find each other sweeter than the ice cream.

sxhxila sxhxila Jun 20
This seems like a really lovely read, and I absolutely love the cover
deliriouslyweird deliriouslyweird 7 days ago
I saw your profile picture as Sam Winchester, so I had to read it XD
ladyliteral ladyliteral Sep 14
🎶And now, looking in your eyes, I feel in my heart the start of something new🎶 xD
randomlydancing randomlydancing Dec 18, 2015
I love your writing, it's  so smooth and lovely :D and omg, she met him!!! or sees him...
- - Dec 11, 2015
The but suggests a change in topic and I feel like your previous paragraph doesn't call for this but. Like it would flow without the but (okay, that sounds weird).
- - Dec 11, 2015
I'm not sure remark is the right word. The word "extent" seems to fit better, in my opinion. :-)