I saw you die

I saw you die

832 Reads 11 Votes 3 Part Story
fudgelicious By fudgelicious Updated Sep 25, 2010

The 16 year old Scarlett Gregory has a gift.. or like she would call it "A portable way of torture". She sees people die but can't do anything about it. Her "visions"  won't leave her alone .. until one day she sees herself die...

fudgelicious fudgelicious Jan 01, 2011
@xoxoFunKatxoxo Thank you!  I'm going to upload ASAP :P 
                              I didn't know anyone liked it :P Thanks for your comments guys!!! D
SparkledRose SparkledRose Dec 30, 2010
Awsome..
                              but you spelled favorite wrong.. and when she sat on the toilet you should put "grey dirty seat" because you already have the word toilet before that, you don't wanna overuse Words..
                              Overall I like it so far, pretty suspenceful ^__^
Kugelmonkey Kugelmonkey Dec 10, 2010
Wow, tense. Good overall, concept, though! :D
                              
                              - Kugelmonkey :) <3