Reticent ◈ Remus Lupin

Reticent ◈ Remus Lupin

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reggie baby By covertxcrisis Completed

Lily Evans meet Hyacinth Burkhart who becomes her best friend. The downfall? 
  
  She's a Slytherin. 
  
  And to the Marauders believe she's invading Gryffindor territory. However one insecure Marauder believes she is something more. 
  
  -Marauder Era-
  -Remus Lupin-

SCARLETWITCHES SCARLETWITCHES Aug 03, 2015
I think this is fairly good, except for the characters personalities are dramatized quite a bit. And it's a tad awkwardly written in terms of describing and how you started the chapter, but it was fun to read overall! Good job!