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Pen Your Pride
Reticent ◈ Remus Lupin

Reticent ◈ Remus Lupin

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finest seduction By tacendas Completed

Lily Evans meet Hyacinth Burkhart who becomes her best friend. The downfall? 
  She's a Slytherin. 
  And to the Marauders believe she's invading Gryffindor territory. However one insecure Marauder believes she is something more. 
  -Marauder Era-
  -Remus Lupin-

  • harrypotter
  • lupin
  • marauderera
  • marauders
  • remus
  • remuslupin
Reticent, there isn't a plan he doesn't Jettison! MADISON YOU MAD AS A HATTER SO TAKE YOUR MEDICINE! DANG YOU IN WORSE SHAPE THAN THE NATIONAL DEBT IS IN! Sittin' there useless as two flips; hey, turn around and bend over. I'll show you where my shoe fits!
I think this is fairly good, except for the characters personalities are dramatized quite a bit. And it's a tad awkwardly written in terms of describing and how you started the chapter, but it was fun to read overall! Good job!