Drew's Girl

Drew's Girl

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Sketchy By Fandom-tastic17 Completed

After May rescues Drew from drowning, the two get stranded. Not knowing where they are or how to get back home,  Drew and May put their differences aside to help each other get back home. Little does May know, Drew is starting to have feelings for her. Adventuring Mirage Island until a friend helps them out, Drew and May are put in some rather awkward situations. When they arrive at Slateport City, will rivalry overthrow the bond they've made?

It has an intense hook, although when I started the fall was a tad bit sudden. Maybe you could've started with a bit of a backstory...? SORRY IF I'M OFFENDING YOU! It's just my honest opinion... So if this is offensive, I am terribly sorry... 😭
Damn... I wish I would have made May say "Oh wait... You already sleep like that every night with your grasshair."
Im sitting here like WHY IS MEH LOVE LIFE NOT OK?! I fight with my "crush"/ best friend that is a boy all the time.
She almost looks cute in it... Wait what! I must be overtired...
                              
                              Lel 😂😂