Through the Door

Through the Door

1 Part Story 883 Reads 26 Votes
Paul By foreverhidion3 Completed

I am excited. My every sense tingles with anticipation. The black door is in front of me, huge and intimidating. I am not afraid.

Moonchild16 Moonchild16 Dec 15, 2012 10:11AM
At least he saved her. Thats the kind of sweet, heroic act everyone loves to read about. :)
Evil_Alice Evil_Alice May 08, 2012 05:33PM
There are no words strong enough to express my feelings on this short story, it is simply too good! You are an amazing author, I am thankful that I found this story!
Emilylulu72 Emilylulu72 Apr 01, 2012 08:12PM
It's quite confusing to understand but once u get it, the story is really good!
EvaKjartans96 EvaKjartans96 Mar 22, 2012 09:25PM
I cried! that was so beautiful!
                              you are an Awesome writer!! :D
RoderickYoung RoderickYoung Jan 25, 2012 12:20AM
I was going to note a capitalization error, "Now He moves away though the mist...," but realized a few words later that the usage is entirely appropriate.
                              
                              This is a beautiful tale of mercy.
foreverhidion3 foreverhidion3 Dec 08, 2011 06:56AM
@MeTheAwesome1 haha :) Ya! A little bit huh...im a sucker for mystery myself!