Broken Melody

Broken Melody

391 Reads 24 Votes 1 Part Story
Jo By JoElizabeth Completed

The way in which we perceive others is skewed. When we see a blind man, we see nothing of his shattered past, nothing of the brilliant life he once led. We only see an old man and his battered violin...

  • memories
  • music
  • sorrow
  • violin
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Sep 01, 2012
@sameoldstory Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought so highly of it!
                              @StayStrongStayYoung Thanks so much for the amazing compliment!
sameoldstory sameoldstory Aug 28, 2012
I've never described a piece of writing as beautiful before but this definitely is! The way you described the music was amazing :)
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Mar 13, 2012
@irishrose Why thank you! :) It was originally written as a challenge to tell a story using every description except sight, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!
irishrose irishrose Mar 13, 2012
what a well-written, emotional, perfectly-described story! this is absolutely wonderful!
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Dec 07, 2011
@emergencyreaction I'm glad you like it! Description is generally a weakness for me, and so for this piece I made sure to focus on it. :)
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Sep 18, 2011
@chasingbutterflies I just found your comment! But thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!