Broken Melody

Broken Melody

1 Part Story 368 Reads 23 Votes
Jo By JoElizabeth Completed

The way in which we perceive others is skewed. When we see a blind man, we see nothing of his shattered past, nothing of the brilliant life he once led. We only see an old man and his battered violin...

JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Sep 01, 2012 03:22AM
@sameoldstory Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought so highly of it!
                                    @StayStrongStayYoung Thanks so much for the amazing compliment!
sameoldstory sameoldstory Aug 28, 2012 02:16PM
I've never described a piece of writing as beautiful before but this definitely is! The way you described the music was amazing :)
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Mar 13, 2012 01:53AM
@irishrose Why thank you! :) It was originally written as a challenge to tell a story using every description except sight, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!
irishrose irishrose Mar 13, 2012 01:49AM
what a well-written, emotional, perfectly-described story! this is absolutely wonderful!
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Dec 07, 2011 10:21PM
@emergencyreaction I'm glad you like it! Description is generally a weakness for me, and so for this piece I made sure to focus on it. :)
JoElizabeth JoElizabeth Sep 18, 2011 03:27AM
@chasingbutterflies I just found your comment! But thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!