Sugar & Spice

Sugar & Spice

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Kenlee Faith💞 By Khbhmh Updated Jun 06, 2016

My dad always told me I was a mix between Sugar and Spice. I was stubborn, sarcastic, caring, and gentle. My dad died when I was 5 and now I'm 13. My mom has dated a handful of guys sense he died and she couldn't find the right one. But what happens when she meets a celebrity? And that celebrity happens to be Chris Evans?

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fredardandly fredardandly Jun 21, 2016
Tip for brain freeze put your thumb on the roof of you mouth it intercepts the cold signals or something i am not exactly sure if you would like to know more google is your best bet bit it works
marvelous_fan marvelous_fan Feb 07, 2016
I like Hayley already ;) I did spell her name right, right??
marvelous_fan marvelous_fan Feb 07, 2016
Just a suggestion.
                              
                              When you're writing try not to have such large paragraphs. It will make the readers feel like they're reading a brick wall. Break up your sentences more and so it will become easier for us to read. This was a good chapter to start off with though :)
marvelous_fan marvelous_fan Feb 07, 2016
Sorry, hate to be a grammar Nazi >•< but this should be 'since' you're saying sense as in feel or awareness.